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Thursday 15 November 2018

The Master Detective

The Master detective



Prologue

"Hello, I need to ask you some question's." Someone said. That someone is me. "I need to know if your ready to go on an adventure of a lifetime." I asked.

Now let's begin. (RING, RING) I pick up the phone. "Hello." I said. "Ki ora, ah, yes, this is chief Lenny. I need your help to find out about a place where all villain's meet up." Said Chief Lenny. "Okay, I'll be there in a few minute's." I said clearly.

Chapter 1

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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous15 November 2018 at 14:22

    Hello Tyler,
    I love your story it's so interesting I want to know what happens next I also like how you put your punctuation. Maybe next time you could describe the charters.

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