The Anzac Violin

W.A.L.T use descriptive language

In writing we read the book, the Anzac Violin. We had to write a diary entry about the person who the story is about.

We had to chose a scene, I chose the scene where he got shot down. I enjoyed reading the book.

I found writing the entry hard.

This is my entry.

I play my special instrument, my violin, one last tune before I go off to battle.
  With my group by my side, we see rancid, rotten, cold, bleeding corpses. We see some little pieces of silver pass our bodies. Bullets! We start to shoot some back and I see my comrades get shot down, oh how I miss my violin. Next thing I know, I’ve gotten shot down. I slowly crawl back to the trench, bleeding. I see all my dead friends. Rotten.
  I reach the trench, ready to go home, bleeding, I still live for another day.

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Have you read the Anzac Violin?

What was your favourite part?