First we looked at the picture, next we had a SUPER brainstorm, last we wrote the story.
A SUPER brainstorm is a huge brainstorm. It's also a long brainstorm. We had to draw the key, next we found 30 things we could see on the picture, next we described the Characters, next we had to write before the picture, write what happened in the picture, write after the picture and last we wrote the story.
The Key
Chapter 1
Adam the finder
A few years ago, before the Giants, there was a kid called Adam.
His friends called him Ad. Sometimes Ad, (Birthplace New
Zealand) went into the basement. He always looked at the
picture on the wall that’s been there since the house was built.
Zealand) went into the basement. He always looked at the
picture on the wall that’s been there since the house was built.
This is the picture.
It meant grave danger. Meanwhile the Bad Samurai leader
was at the Wrecking ball store.
was at the Wrecking ball store.
At Ads house a Good Samurai (Birthplace unknown)
knocked on the door.
knocked on the door.
Ad opened the door. A few minutes of talking later.
The Good Samurai gave Ad a key.
Ad knew this would happen 1 day,and he knew that if he lost it, it could get into the wrong hands.
A few days later, Ad was in the basement again
writing and drawing about the key.
writing and drawing about the key.
This is his drawing.
It can destroy the world.
While Ad was in the basement, he lost the key
by dropping it into the time machine he built the year before.
by dropping it into the time machine he built the year before.
It fell out of his pocket walking to his desk.
A few minutes later, Ad realized that he lost the key.
He heard the time machine after an hour of looking.
He went into the time machine.
Ad went into the time machine to look for it.
To be continued…. Immediately.
Chapter 2.
65 Million Years in the Making
Ad, (also known as Adam) was now in 2000 years ago in BC.
The key was in the time machine.
Ad got out of the time machine.
Next he saw a Parasaurolophus fighting a
T-rex that just killed a Carnotaurus.
T-rex that just killed a Carnotaurus.
The Para stepped on on Ad. After that the meteor hit the earth.
To be continued…. Immediately.
Chapter 3
The next day,
Ad was alive but the dinosaurs weren’t.
Ad found the key inside the time machine.
Ad found the key inside the time machine.
So he went in the time machine, grabbed the key
and went to the present.
and went to the present.
When he got to the present his dad yelled,
“GET DOWN ADAM!” so Ad got down.
“GET DOWN ADAM!” so Ad got down.
They both died by a wrecking ball.
The Bad Samurai Leader was done wrecking ball shopping.
When Ad died he dropped the key again.
The Bad Samurai leader grabbed the key and left.
The end.
Chapter 4
The end (Or years later)
Years later the Bad Samurai Leader pulled out the key,
opened an underground door and died.
opened an underground door and died.
The end.
Hi Tyler. I love the writing you have done. You have included many descriptive and wow words that allow us to understand what is happening. This story captivates the reader which is what any great author wants. Next time, maybe you could include the 5 senses. This would allow the reader to understand your character a bit more.
ReplyDeleteThanks Miss Holland for your comment. I will make sure that the next story will have the senses. What about the 5 W's and the 1 H too?
DeleteHi Tyler. I like your writing you add lots of interesting words and i like how you did chapters because if people are reading it they now were the chapters are and some people stop at the first chapter and read the next chapter the next day. I love it i cant wait to see the next amazing thing that you put on your blog bye.
ReplyDeleteTyler I like your story it is very Interesting. May be continue the story like how did he died. It reminds me about a story I read about Dinousaurs. Anyway it is pretty good.
ReplyDeleteBy Grace