This week my group got a non-fiction story. It is called Sniffer Dog. It's about a dog named Isaak and he is a beagle. Sniffer dogs work at the airport to see if anyone has smuggled in anything that is fruit, veges, plants or plant materials.
Why a beagle for a sniffer dog you ask. It is because beagles have an excellent sense of smell. So this week we had to make a machine to replace of help Isaak and other sniffer dogs. I made something that is an x-ray.
You'll see the name is the google drawing.
Do you like the name and why or why not?
If you have seen any mistakes, tell me in the comments, it's free.
Hey Tyler, I really like how you added labels so we know what you have draw. Next time I think you could like some more information of what it can do.
ReplyDeleteGood job though!
Hi Tyler,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, nice blog post! Keep it up :)
One thing I like about this blog post you've created is that you've added a pretty good description. I also like how you've added labels detail etc.
I think overall you could work on making the actual pictures you made more noticeable for what they actually are meant to be.
-Mya :)