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Friday, 8 November 2019

What would you do When Trapped in a Video Game?

On Wednesday we got to chose a story starter. I chose one where I'm trapped in a video game. The characters are my own creation. One of them is me.


This story is fun, it has levels and of course, a final boss. If you want to know what happens, you need to read the whole story. No chapters but it is very long.


The Video Game

Once I was just playing video games with my friend Bob. It was about 11 o-clock at night. We just got done with a game so we found a new game. The game was called Unlimited Imagination, (Not a real game. Do not try and buy it at the store). I put the game disc in PS4. The game started. I was player 1 so I pressed the start button.

After that, something strange happened. The game started glitching. A portal opened on the TV screen. Bob and I got sucked into the TV.
“AHHHHH!” I screamed as I got sucked in.

It was dark. Next thing I know it it was so bright. It was morning in the game. I looked up. I saw my health bar. I saw Bobs, too. In the air it said “Level 1.” This game had levels!

There was a note on the ground. I picked it up and read it out loud. “To complete the game, you must defeat the final boss.” I read. “To find the boss, you must find clues. The first clue is to go find the river, there you must find the first boss. Defeat him, get the next clue.”

All of a sudden I found a map. I picked it up. It was a map of the whole world. It showed where we are, and where we need to go.

Next Bob and I were attacked by some bad guys. We both started punching them. They dropped weapons. Now Bob and I have 1 pistol and 1 sword each.

With our swords we defeated the rest of our new enemies. We started our walk to the river.

On the way we found a car. We were on a hill not too far from the car. Bad guys were guarding it. We went down with our swords and attacked the enemies. They all got defeated. They’re bodies disappeared. Bob and I hopped in the car. I was in the driver's seat. No seatbelts….

“Wait a minute.” Said Bob. “This game is called Unlimited Imagination. We could imagine some seatbelts.” So that's what we did.

In no time we were at the river. We got out of the car. There was the first boss. “You’ll never win.” He said. “My name is Good. That doesn’t mean I’m a good guy.”

“You will be defeated.” I said. Next we got into a fight. I used my sword to attack. Good got his sword out and stabbed me. Looks like it’s the end for me. I died. All of a sudden I respawned.

“It’s one of those games where you respawn.” I said. I stabbed Good in the face. He just died. He didn’t respawn because he’s an enemy. His body disappeared and gave me the 2nd clue.

In the sky in said, “Level 2.” We were on level 2. I read the clue. “To find the next clue, you must go to Crab Cliff’s.” I read. “There you must defeat Gi-Crab. He is the next boss. On the way you will find a mini boss called, The Bug.” What does it mean?

We got on the boat that was shown on the map. I used my imagination to make the boat a speed boat. Bob and I made our way to Crab Cliff’s. Our boat was too fast. We crashed onto the side of the mountain. There we started climbing. Well, kinda. Bob imagined an elevator.

The elevator took us to a cave. It got dark. We slept in that cave that night. We imagined beds. All of a sudden there was a rock slide overnight. In the morning we made our way through the caves. Bob died and respawned all of sudden. It was The Bug. I used my sword and cut off a leg. It grew back. That giant bug can regenerate health. So I imagined I had a weapon to defeat The Bug quick. “Rocket launcher.” I said with a snap. I now have a ba-zooka.

“Stand back Bob.” I said shooting The Bug. It blew up. Bob and I ran out of the cave as it caved in. We encountered gi-crab. A giant crab. I used the ba-zooka again but it only took away half of it’s health. I fired again and this time it worked.

Gi-crab died giving me the next clue. “To find the next clue, go to where you started. The plains. Use the planes on this cliff to make your way to the river. Follow the river, find the plains.” I read out loud.

Bob and I spotted the planes it talked about on the clue. We hopped in them. Good thing there were 2. The planes took us to the river, where we found a speed boat. “The people who made this game just got lazy here.” I said as we hopped in the boat. It took us to where we defeated Good.

We found the same car. We hopped in. It took us to where we started but with a twist. There were double bosses. Ba-zooka again. They died instantly. We got the next clue. “Head to the train station. You will find 1 mini-boss, and a whole bunch of mini-games." 

So Bob and I sped to the train station. We were so fast that we got there in 30 seconds. It was abandoned. We found the mini-boss but we ran him over. We found the mini-game box. I opened it. Now we got teleported into a basketball game.

I had to get the ball in the hop for a game trophy. (Achievement.) I did exactly that. In the air in said level 4 because we completed levels 2 and 3. Next to the level 4 it gave my PS4 account an achievement.

We saw a train so we hopped on the roof. The train started moving. In the sky it said, “Final boss!” The final boss appeared. “Hello. My name is Evil.” He said. “I’m going to kill yo-” Before he could finish I attacked him. I use my sword and I kept stabbing him. I saw a bridge up ahead. It looked unstable.

I grabbed Bob and we both jumped off the train. We died. We respawned on the grass. The train Evil was on went on the unstable bridge. The bridge broke and Evil fell to his doom. He died. Bob and I started flying towards the sky. I woke up. It was all a dream.

We finished the game. Bob went home and I started playing the game again. This time it wasn’t glitching. I was lucky.

The end.

Did you enjoy.

If you did, what did you like and why?



1 comment:

  1. Hi Tyler! My name is Hana, and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!

    Wow Tyler! This piece of writing is amazing! I love how you've sorted out your writing into paragraphs! That way, the writing is more separate, and It's easier to read!

    You must've been really lucky. Because at that part where you died, if it wasn't a game where you could respawn, you would've been gone! Forever!

    Next time, you could try to add more descriptive language. Also, a small mistake, at the very end, when you said, "Did you like it?" you forgot to add the question mark.

    Keep up the good work!

    From Hana

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