Hey guys, still day 2. If you have been doing the Summer Learning Journey what are you hoping to win? I'm hoping to win an Ipad. In this activity I had to write a poem about Neil Armstrong on the moon. I had to pretend I was Neil Armstrong and I had to write a poem.
This is it
Mankind sent me, Neil Armstrong to the Moon.
On Apollo 11, I felt a bit nervous but I made it.
On the moon I was excited because I was the first person.
No gravity, I was so happy to be on the moon.
I found the entire poem difficult.
I enjoyed writing the poem because I like writing.
If I was the first person on the moon I'd jump a lot.
What would you do if you were first on the moon.
Hi Tyler!
ReplyDeleteMe again. :)
I like how even though you found writing poetry difficult you still gave it a go. You've ended up producing a good poem as well. :)
If you really could go to the moon, do you think you'd want to? I think it'd be such a cool experience!
Mā te wā,
Mikey :)
Kia Ora Tyler,
ReplyDeleteI like this poem about the moon, its really descriptive. I like how you have added what was difficult, I never thought of adding what was difficult of making the poem.
Maybe next time you could do a different type of poem.
Bye for now
Manuk :))