The Best Animal in the World to me

In writing, we've been learning about Expository writing. We did this for about 3 weeks. It was really fun, a few people enjoyed it, like me. For each topic, we wrote about 2 paragraphs. In the end they all worked out. The best animal in the world is something we had to write about. This is one of my documents.


The best animal in the world to me is a Velocaraptor. This is because they were very fast, and very smart. For example, they have razor sharp claws that could be used for defense or hunting. Furthermore, they’re smartness, helps them hunt other dinosaurs, large or tiny, this would be helpful when they fight other dinosaurs they’re size. Also they hunt in packs, this is also helpful for a dinosaur they can’t take down alone. Another example, they are very fast so an animal that's slower than they’re full speed, the Velocaraptor can take down. As a result, the Velocaraptor is the best animal is the world, to me, so if I could keep one as a pet, I would, as long as it doesn’t eat me.


The best animal in the world to me is a Velocaraptor. This is because of they’re hunting strategy and they’re speed, don’t forget they’re size. For example, they’re size is big enough to fit through doors, so if you had one as a pet and you can’t open doors, leave it to your Velocaraptor. Furthermore, they have razor sharp claws that can take down an enemy. Another example is they’re smartness, they are very intelligent, and like it said before, they can open doors. Also they have very fast speeds, they can double their speed when hungry, so they can take down prey. As a result, that’s why I think that the Velocaraptor is the best animal in the world.

The best animal in the world to me is the Velocaraptor. I chose this because Velocaraptors are smart and small. The hunt is packs too. I know they're extinct, but they're still the best animal in the world to me.